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[Naruto Art] Initiative

Initiative
By: Ken
Complete: 05.09.2011
Pairing: Shikamaru & Chouji
Characters © Kishimoto Masashi
Warnings: i can't color.
Picture: Initiative



~ Critique with Aburame Shino ~

Shino:
this artwork is for the Definitions Series fic Initiative.

Why?

Because there is no such thing as enough ShikaChou

When asked for something positive on the piece Ken said: i'm especially proud of the composition and colors used, even though i'm not very skilled at using color.

When asked for something negative he said: Shikamaru's head looks huge, but it isn't! Chouji's face is just mostly hidden by his hair, the bandanna and Shikamaru's hands, so. disproportionate but not really, and i couldn't fix it. as usual. i suck as an artist, but i still like drawing. ^_^

End.

Comments

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tj_dragonblade
May. 12th, 2011 08:04 am (UTC)
I like the way it turned out with color. It's almost got a, a watercolor-type feel about it, in a way. It's really nice. ^_^ And Shikamaru's head hadn't struck me as looking disproportionate, pretty much for all the reasons you listed. It works just right in the whole, to my eye.
entitys
May. 12th, 2011 06:57 pm (UTC)
I like the way it turned out with color.

*T_T* <-- these are manly tears for the record.

It's almost got a, a watercolor-type feel about it

oil pastels, because that is my creative weapon of choice if i could actually still use them in real life ^_^; much obliged painter software

Shikamaru's head hadn't struck me as looking disproportionate

i think it's because he's got such an epic forehead that draws my eye that i -- anyhow.

THANK YOU. nobody really looks at my little scribblings. so. *hugs*
tj_dragonblade
May. 17th, 2011 08:57 pm (UTC)
Well, I quite like your 'little scribblings'. ^_^

Oil Pastels. Y'know, that's kind of what I wanted to say, but I'm not real knowledgeable on the look/effect of all the different artistic media and wasn't sure it was the right term. But I like the effect, in any case.
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